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We live in a world
where seven hours
isn't nearly enough sleep
to push you through a day
only push you off the edge
into a downhill spiral
to a crashing thud,
a bump on the head,
the scrape of a knee.
It's all just enough
to feel trapped and confused.
There's no closure in the darkness
you're just blinded by the light
and clanking your pencil
against the prison bars
screams unheard in the night.
Every day you're pulled away
from the home in a home
the pillow in your bedroom
spirits once lifted tear into your chest.
Hearts are broken
bellies starving
finger twitching
towards the sound of false freedom
to bubble through the walls.
In chains and cuffs
we move forward
towards the end
of another beginning
waiting in a world
where seven hours
isn't nearly enough sleep
to push you through a day
only push you off the edge.
©2005-2009 ~LoserPixie
:iconloserpixie:

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ummm...the voices in my head...again...not letting me sleep... :: eye twitch ::

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:iconwarriortarawen:
Geeze.. doesn't it tell the truth.. that is how I feel exactly every day going to school and in school.. like i'm in a prison, longing to get out... and I certainly dont get enough sleep anymore.... Nice poem :)

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"Love is a bitch, especially when he breaks your heart."
:iconwarriortarawen:
welcome :)

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"Love is a bitch, especially when he breaks your heart."
:iconwarriortarawen:
welcome :)

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"Love is a bitch, especially when he breaks your heart."
:iconmountainrng:
that is too true! Mark
:iconhallen3d:
Very true, and very nicely written, I love the pacing in how it comes from fast to slow, and the form of a story an yet a poem, you're a wonerful writer Joy...

Love,
:rose:Mandi
:iconhallen3d:
Very true, and very nicely written, I love the pacing in how it comes from fast to slow, and the form of a story an yet a poem, you're a wonderful writer Joy...

Love,
:rose:Mandi
:iconkanio-83:
wow, sorry for the late comment, but i like it hehe, :hug: :hug: :hug:

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P.S. Joy è la mia dea!!!
Your heart has the key to open my life.

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